托福备考-独立写作之末段模板

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前面我们已经讲解了首段及中间段的模板，今天我们将继续补充末段的模板（加粗部分为可以套用的话）。

 

1.普遍适用

All in all, I agree with the concept that zoos serve desirable purposes. Opposition to zoos, in my opinion, is mostly based on outdated views of zoos. Today's zoos shelter animals and teach people about animals and the environmental dangers they are exposed to.

 

下面以一道题例证这个模板的套用。

Business should hire employees for their entire lives. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

 

末段：

All in all, I agree with the concept that businesses can fire employees if necessary. Opposition to this practice, in my opinion, is mostly based on outmoded ideas of employment. While workers have a greater range of options, today's companies face cutthroat competition, so they can only hire the most competent personnel.

 

2.适用于“描述解释型”文章

To tell the truth, I have not read much about Benjamin Franklin. I would like to learn more about him, however, because of his unique talents and ideas. It would be an inspiring experience to meet him.

 

3.适用于“比较对比型”文章

I can see some disadvantages to building a new movie theater here. On the whole, though, I think my neighborhood should support having a new movie theater here. It would provide more opportunities for entertainment, reduce teenage delinquency, and bring more business.

 

4.适用于“二选一型”文章

Taking into account all factors, I would prefer to live in a big city. Doing so enables me to get to different places more conveniently, enjoy more excitement, and more job opportunities. With more excitement and more opportunities, I can enjoy a wealthier and more leisurely life. As people sometimes say, "A meaningful life is worth two."

 

下面以一道题例证这个模板的套用。

Would you prefer to live in a traditional house or in a modern apartment building? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.

 

末段

Taking into account all factors, I would prefer to live in a traditional house. Doing so provides me with greater space and a better understanding of the neighborhood. With the extra space and understanding, one can enjoy a more relaxed lifestyle. As people sometimes say, "A neighbor nearby is more helpful than a relative far away."

 

除了上述模板以外，结尾还可以用一些类似于下面的套话：

1. Judging from all the evidence offered, we may safely arrive at the conclusion that.....

2. From what has been discussed above, we may safely come to the conclusion that.....

3. Taking into account all these factors, we may safely draw the conclusion that.....

4. While it is true that....., I think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

5. When the facts are examined, its advantages and disadvantages weighed, and biased opinions cast away, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that.....

 

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